Monday, February 21, 2011

Dramatizing

Bocca says, "The art of dramatizing begins with characterization. Bring all your characters to life." To me characterization begins with the naming of the characters. Just as Michele said on Friday, name are very important. They must be given some thought. Another thing that Bocca talks about is the structure of the sentence and paragraph. I believe that whatever you right, it must be easily understood. The book discuses why use a long word when a shorter word will do. That makes complete. Simple words give way to better flow. Sometimes short words will not do. However, there are times when a short word will accomplish the same thing. Sometimes we may have to use a thesaurus to get better words to use. Bocca, gives credit to George Orwell for these principles. He says, "If it is possible to cut a word, cut it out." Going back to what Michele said about names, Bocca says, "Avoid names ending in s." He believes this is important when you are maing those names to show possesion.

4 comments:

  1. I really like finding names of my characters. It gives a hint to the reader who the character is. A name like Max Strong would an entirely different image from a character named Ezra Meeks. Max is a robust body guard and Ezra is a shy kind of fellow. It makes a big difference, as we learned in class last Friday.

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  2. BTW - Why no names ending in 's'?

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  3. The names exercise we did in class was cool and at the same time a learning experience. I really have no problem coming up with the first names but those second names lol. But hitting on the subject about the short words instead of long words, i definitely agree. It seems like this semester I've had to do more reading than ever and I seem to come across a lot of big words that could have been replaced by shorter ones. The big words lets me know that I do need to work on my vocab, but at the same time those big words can kill the feel of the story by a reader.

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  4. I bet we have different ideas about what are "long" words and what are "short" words -- and Dwayne is right -- reading makes a difference in your vocabulary.

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